Here is my completed work including my front cover, contents page and double page spread. Consisting of my resarch looked at previous reasearch such as my audience research and magazine research.
i think she's really thought about the mise en scene of the magazine, the shooting of the photographs and the colours of the models clothing, (black and white, graveyard link to rock well.) another good thing; it's clean and approachable, she's broken conventions, in a good way. i think the only thing she could improve on is the title on the front cover, it's not very visible compared to the band name so you may think 'Passion' is the name of the magazine.
the front cover is really effective and stands out well, it is really simple, but yet really effective and works very well... Also the text is very well laid out and a variety of fonts and sizes have been used. The only thing i would say needs improving is the white space used on the co ntents page.
I like your images you've used, an i think you've used white space quite well, it suits your style of magazine. Could of used more Editing on the photos.
It's obvious that you've thought hard about the use of mise en scene. The pictures have also been used nicely. The only thing is the free poster inside on the front cover looks slightly out of place.
i think she's really thought about the mise en scene of the magazine, the shooting of the photographs and the colours of the models clothing, (black and white, graveyard link to rock well.)
ReplyDeleteanother good thing; it's clean and approachable, she's broken conventions, in a good way.
i think the only thing she could improve on is the title on the front cover, it's not very visible compared to the band name so you may think 'Passion' is the name of the magazine.
the front cover is really effective and stands out well, it is really simple, but yet really effective and works very well... Also the text is very well laid out and a variety of fonts and sizes have been used. The only thing i would say needs improving is the white space used on the co ntents page.
ReplyDeleteI like your images you've used, an i think you've used white space quite well, it suits your style of magazine. Could of used more Editing on the photos.
ReplyDeleteIt's obvious that you've thought hard about the use of mise en scene. The pictures have also been used nicely. The only thing is the free poster inside on the front cover looks slightly out of place.
ReplyDeletereally nice DPS and a clear sense of house style although i dont think the poster advertisment doesnt really go
ReplyDeleteI really like your photos and the fonts you have used however i think the front cover is a bit too simple.
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